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This book is just full of sentence fragments and honestly, it's annoying. The storyline is interesting but I'm not sure I like the writing style. It's very syncopated and she hardly ever uses complete sentences. This was a paragraph: "Two complaints. One about objects. One about people." 3 sentences, none of them complete. Even if you string all three together, it doesn't even make a complete sentence.
Aug 07, 2026 12:07PM
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