Rhiannon’s Reviews > The Jasad Heir > Status Update

Am I supposed to be awed by a stadium *two stories* tall? Is this a typo?

That's...not what a pavilion is. Like, words have meanings? Maybe if you're going to use a word to mean something else, choose a different word???

I'm not the most critical little muffin when I'm reading, but even I am like "what the fuck?" at this plan to go through the Meridian Pass, a place seemingly designed for ambushes, in order to avoid...being ambushed while in a larger crowd? Does the author not understand why travellers used to group themselves together in caravans?

'This was the closest we had been without someone actively bleeding.'

I hope this picks up, because currently I'm underwhelmed.