Amber’s Reviews > Of Ink and Alchemy > Status Update

Why is this so long??? It's not...bad per se, but it's not good either. This book needed some serious editing. Some of the conversations between characters are messed up. Logan speaking, then his brother, and back to him, but it all reads as if Logan said it all. Happens multiple times. This book is burdened by inaction and too many minor and mundane things/details to be exciting. It is throwing the pacing way off.