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Bad omen here… this particular sentence structure raises some red flags, doesn’t it ??
“Miss Bingley was praising Derbyshire with all the enthusiasm of a person who had never voluntarily admired anything outside London unless it belonged to him.”
— Sep 09, 2026 07:32AM
“Miss Bingley was praising Derbyshire with all the enthusiasm of a person who had never voluntarily admired anything outside London unless it belonged to him.”
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Lit Reader
is 90% done
Serious timeline problem !!
Elizabeth leaves Pemberley in a hurry, she is going south by carriage with the Gardiners. Darcy leaves Pemberley hours after them by horse, and yet instead of easily catching with with them on the road, it’s three days AFTER Elizabeth has already arrived to Longbourn (explicitly, Lizzy says it’s been a week since Pemberley!) and he is not arrived yet — bonkers!
— Sep 10, 2026 01:00PM
Elizabeth leaves Pemberley in a hurry, she is going south by carriage with the Gardiners. Darcy leaves Pemberley hours after them by horse, and yet instead of easily catching with with them on the road, it’s three days AFTER Elizabeth has already arrived to Longbourn (explicitly, Lizzy says it’s been a week since Pemberley!) and he is not arrived yet — bonkers!
Lit Reader
is 70% done
This “story” is one never-ending timeloop on which Miss Bingley tries to manage Georgiana, Georgiana is pained by it, Darcy notices, there is some subtle rebellion, Miss Bingley is too-subtly put in her place, Darcy ponders about how he should have noticed this and prevented it… and then the exact same thing happens all over again without any plot advancement !!
— Sep 10, 2026 07:52AM
Lit Reader
is 35% done
Too forward by far !!
“I believe,” she said while scanning titles, “that this room alone might persuade many women to marry.”
— Sep 09, 2026 04:34PM
“I believe,” she said while scanning titles, “that this room alone might persuade many women to marry.”
Lit Reader
is 30% done
Watching Lydia at Pemberley interacting with Georgiana is entertaining, even endearing. But the clever repartee, besides being formulaic, hides a parade of puzzling open-ended subplots…
What was Bingley’s reaction meetinf the Bennet sisters at Pemberly? Did Miss Bingley acknowledge in any way visiting the Gardiners’ home in London? Why Bingley only laughs at Lydia but doesn’t ask about the Bennets back home?
— Sep 09, 2026 02:21PM
What was Bingley’s reaction meetinf the Bennet sisters at Pemberly? Did Miss Bingley acknowledge in any way visiting the Gardiners’ home in London? Why Bingley only laughs at Lydia but doesn’t ask about the Bennets back home?
Lit Reader
is 5% done
Nearly every dialogue consists of a three piece structure >>
1) a simple statement
2) an answering denial or negative formula
3) an ammended reply incorporating the denial, now in positive form, often metaphoric or abstract
It’s formumaic and tiresome. This is why readers suspect so many authora use AI — more so when used for filler scenes !
— Sep 09, 2026 06:25AM
1) a simple statement
2) an answering denial or negative formula
3) an ammended reply incorporating the denial, now in positive form, often metaphoric or abstract
It’s formumaic and tiresome. This is why readers suspect so many authora use AI — more so when used for filler scenes !