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Oooooh! It’s starting to get really good—intense!

“… the whine of her pen against paper.”
I don’t think I’ve ever heard or thought about the sound of pen against paper as a “whine?” It stands out in a bit of a strange way.

Can’t stop thinking about this line for the past few minutes. I get what it’s getting at, though. It just makes me think of a pen in a more electronic way, strangely.

Interesting how this next person is taken out. I’m surprised there wasn’t more investigation for handwriting, like they all just took one another at their words? It seems like a bit of a hole to me?

Gonna be honest, I really like this, but I do find it just a tad hard to keep track of the characters…

It’s not enough for me to stop reading, but it is hindering how fast I’m getting through this story.