guillotinegal’s Reviews > Dungeon Crawler Carl > Status Update

I’m officially half way through the book. It’s interesting enough to keep reading, but I don’t feel any attachment to any of the characters. Like I’m not really rooting for anyone, just kind of seeing where this is all going. They mention using the bathroom very frequently and I feel like that’s because in real life people are always trying to be the wise guy, asking about when or where characters would hav

At the bottom of the page, I feel like the description of the fight becomes very strange. It seems like details are being repeated one sentence after the other.

It’s not as bad with more context. I don’t really have any issue with the story itself, just the way it’s written throws me off sometimes. It feels sort of jarring in a way to, to be reading a book and see somewhat modern memes and references to social media.