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Hmmm. This isn't bad, but I think it is for a younger YA audience. It's very repetitive sometimes and the sentences are very short.
— Sep 16, 2026 06:24AM
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is 70% done
This author just used the phrase "unalived themselves." Am I the only one who really doesn't like when internet speak is used in the actual meat of the book? This wasn't spoken or texted, this was just the character thinking. If this were a book about an influencer or told in the form of texts/comments/internet stuff, okay. But this book about life and death and angels and demons? It took me right out.
— Sep 16, 2026 07:32AM