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4⭐️
Enemies to lover
Academic rivals
Both of those tropes are very light. They’re never truly enemies, but they’re competitive towards one another, and although they are academic rivals on Alice’s mind, Henry never looked at each other as rivals. He just thought it was fun competition because he actually likes Alice and has been liking Alice.

In the end she gets caught cause she does a risky task where she kidnaps then trys to save a student, after it comes to light why she did it why that wasn’t worth it what’s more important than money and understanding her own values outside of what other people want And a guy named Henry she finds out that he likes her and has liked her for a long time therefore she feels seen by him but also she sees herself now

The title is called. If you could see the sun, the main character’s name is Alice Sun
She doesn’t feel seen. She never feel seen, and she doesn’t see herself because she strives to be like the people around her and she puts value in whatever she thinks other people put value in.

4⭐️
I really enjoyed the story and I think the title was very creative. The ideas was very creative. I do think it was it made you think about things more so thought-provoking it’s a simple story where it doesn’t feel overstimulating to read. It’s not super deep or complicated and it’s still very enjoyable.

This turning into a kidnap mission is crazy

One mission she never turns invisible. The guy wants to be a date anyway he tells her not to worry about that. He makes it a date they leave she never in night. She has to tell him she can go through the plane or with the job. She feel bad about it cause she was a failure, but I feel the guy feels good about it bc he feels like they were on a date

She didn’t greedy about the money
First you need enough money in school as she then that she saying she needs enough money for college. She’s like if I just keep doing a job I’ll keep getting money and Shes sacrifice complete and her focus on her schoolwork.

He REALLY likes her, and now bc she’s stressed she’s taking it out on him and he’s just trying to be helpful and patient

This is fun and in the gaps I’ve been looking forward to getting back to the story
- the mmc is funny and cute
- like he wants to help her
- When the guy asked why he hanging around and he said option one option too is that you like me that you’re right I do like you funny
- he wants compliment from her. She wants to impress her.
- she doesn’t hate her and he thought it was fun competition between them