haletostilinski’s Reviews > Jealous Guy > Status Update
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Making a past reddit post about a guy who thought he was straight and was jealous of his gay best friend dating others into a whole novel um yes please!
— Oct 02, 2026 03:24PM
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haletostilinski
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Okay, no more lecture-y-ness, I don't know why it was there earlier. This so good, I rarely vibe so much with friends to lovers so much but this is doing it SO well.
— Oct 03, 2026 02:12AM
haletostilinski
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I'm loving this, but this swerve into Feminism 101 feels a bit after school special to me. Feels like we're being lectured at out of nowhere instead of just showing Jordan and Orion respecting women and standing up for them (which, great! but did we need a "one time this guy did this thing and Jordan stood up to him" scene that feels out of place in a story supposed to be about them?)
— Oct 03, 2026 12:04AM