Cassandra’s Reviews > Haunting Adeline > Status Update

lmao wtf am I reading anymore.
The male MC's perspective reads like a teenage edge lord's wet dream. How is all of this not excusing rape when the guy's vigilantism is written to be a part of his supposed good nature and NOT because he's a psycho-sadist? This isn't dark romance—it's a rape fantasy.

The most unbelievable thing in this book is that a psychopath would become a vigilante to save human trafficking victims...

Stalker-Dude's narration sounds way too similar to Adeline's. He uses the same descriptors that Adeline uses for herself. Worst thing about shared 1st-POV stories is when the narrators sound like each other. It's like they have no personalities of their own. Bummer.

lol

Omg. I'm six pages in and the grammar and word choices are already testing my patience...