TypOnomIcon’s Reviews > Jake's Magical Market > Status Update
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Deep-seated. Seated. Get an editor, man. The world and ideas are so cool, but this is a tough read at times. I feel like I’m reading a 2nd draft. Stop telling me how you feel and show me so I can be immersed, Jake.
— Oct 07, 2026 03:19AM
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TypOnomIcon
is on page 330 of 575
The writing overall improves during part 2. Worth sticking through the weaker chapters if you find the ideas interesting.
— Oct 07, 2026 06:29PM
TypOnomIcon
is on page 100 of 575
I’m enjoying the system, and the premise/world building scratches a DCC itch for me. Jake is pretty annoying. Jury is still out on the cast on the whole.
— Oct 04, 2026 08:15AM
TypOnomIcon
is on page 30 of 575
Immediately doesn’t need to be after every action done with urgency and purpose, my friend.
— Oct 02, 2026 03:37AM
TypOnomIcon
is on page 20 of 575
Enjoying the mix of elements that make this up so far, but the prose is rough. A lot of unnecessary words and clunky sentences already, needs an editor.
— Sep 30, 2026 05:54PM