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Jenna
is on page 298 of 485
this would be so much better if the tone of the book matched the content. but the writing style is so juvenile
— Oct 07, 2026 02:45PM
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Jenna
is on page 196 of 485
the content of this book is so adult and dark, but the tone and writing of the perspective is so immature in places that it’s super jarring.
it makes it really hard to stay focused on the narrative
— Aug 28, 2026 08:04PM
it makes it really hard to stay focused on the narrative
Jenna
is on page 148 of 485
WHY write half the book in first person pov just to switch to third person for the mmc’s perspective?? just write in third the whole time, omfg
i can’t prove it but this is sjm’s fault, i just know it
— Aug 15, 2026 04:56AM
i can’t prove it but this is sjm’s fault, i just know it
Jenna
is on page 103 of 485
the potential is so peak but the pov is so limiting. the levels of unreliable narrator we could be hitting right now… sigh
— Aug 12, 2026 02:06PM
Jenna
is on page 18 of 485
We need to free romance fantasy authors from the shackles of first person, I’m so serious
— Aug 10, 2026 12:00AM