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Laroc
Laroc is 99% done
Also FMC hid virginity from mmc whole time and they were having sex when he realized no real interesting take on this or response from him once he found out. They also fell in love right away but didn’t tell each other but it still moved fast so there was minimal build up or tension. Also I’m not a fan of grand corny gestures. So dropped another star for that
— Oct 26, 2026 02:24PM
Hot as Puck (Bad Motherpuckers, #1)

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Laroc
Laroc is 99% done
This had a lot of things I could’ve liked but the execution wasn’t there. FMC is shy virgin teacher friend of hot whore hockey player. She asks for lessons to know how to get the vp at her schools attention. They hook up and while the spice was good everything else was lackluster. No real jealous scene eventhough she did go on date with om.
— Oct 26, 2026 02:21PM
Hot as Puck (Bad Motherpuckers, #1)


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