Ember L.’s Reviews > Those Girls > Status Update

This is really really bad. It feels like a teenager took over writing the second part of the book. This writing is almost insufferable.

Are we sure Skylar isn’t 12? She sounds younger than Jessica did at 15.

This books reads like a cheesy YA novel.

LMFAO, “I’m five-ten ALREADY,” says the 18-year-old 🙄

Burn him a DVD? A DV fucking D?! How did nobody catch this? She’s burning him a CD with music on it, not a fucking DVD, WHAT IN THE ACTUAL FUCK????

He “united” her hands, but he should’ve “untied” them. 🙄

I don’t understand how books and movies aren’t required to have content warnings when it comes to r*pe and torture and shit like that. This is disgusting.

This feels very drawn out. I hope it gets better soon because I’m close to DNFing.

I don’t know why it bothers me so much but I absolutely cannot stand when people say suntan lotion. It’s sunscreen, guys. You use tanning oil for a tan. I highly doubt these girls were worried about their suntan. They were putting on sunscreen, not fucking “suntan lotion.”