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Ember L.
is on page 174 of 384
This is really really bad. It feels like a teenager took over writing the second part of the book. This writing is almost insufferable.
— Nov 02, 2026 08:26AM
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Ember L.
is on page 168 of 384
Are we sure Skylar isn’t 12? She sounds younger than Jessica did at 15.
— Oct 31, 2026 11:59AM
Ember L.
is on page 166 of 384
LMFAO, “I’m five-ten ALREADY,” says the 18-year-old 🙄
— Oct 31, 2026 11:41AM
Ember L.
is on page 162 of 384
Burn him a DVD? A DV fucking D?! How did nobody catch this? She’s burning him a CD with music on it, not a fucking DVD, WHAT IN THE ACTUAL FUCK????
— Oct 31, 2026 11:30AM
Ember L.
is on page 102 of 384
He “united” her hands, but he should’ve “untied” them. 🙄
— Oct 28, 2026 01:05PM
Ember L.
is on page 95 of 384
I don’t understand how books and movies aren’t required to have content warnings when it comes to r*pe and torture and shit like that. This is disgusting.
— Oct 28, 2026 12:57PM
Ember L.
is on page 88 of 384
This feels very drawn out. I hope it gets better soon because I’m close to DNFing.
— Oct 28, 2026 12:44PM
Ember L.
is on page 61 of 384
I don’t know why it bothers me so much but I absolutely cannot stand when people say suntan lotion. It’s sunscreen, guys. You use tanning oil for a tan. I highly doubt these girls were worried about their suntan. They were putting on sunscreen, not fucking “suntan lotion.”
— Oct 25, 2026 07:04AM