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is 24% done
Like, why did we spend thirty pages reading about Wil wanting to take a bath, preparing to take a bath, taking a bath? I thought he was going to fight nekkid in the bathhouse, like Viggo Mortensen in Eastern Promises. But no, he just took a bath. Phh!
— Jun 26, 2017 10:47AM
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Juxian
is 27% done
It's not bad, it's just feels a bit... amateurish? Like it almost, almost could've worked if it were a bit more skilfully written. As it is, I just don't care - neither about main characters, nor about the mysteries around them. Maybe I'll come back to it some day (but unlikely).
— Jun 26, 2017 11:32AM
