Michael’s Reviews > Eden Green > Status Update

I'm almost annoyed with myself that I'm starting to get into this.

Finally getting to this. Much as I can't stand present-tense narratives, I'm going to try to put my bias aside and give this a fair chance.

-Writing style feels too conversational; would work better spoken
-A couple puns give the impression the author thought of them as they were writing and tossed them in as interjections
-Little exposition, other than black needle monsters and super powers
-Great imagery