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I'm almost annoyed with myself that I'm starting to get into this.
— Sep 12, 2017 03:26AM
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Finally getting to this. Much as I can't stand present-tense narratives, I'm going to try to put my bias aside and give this a fair chance.
-Writing style feels too conversational; would work better spoken
-A couple puns give the impression the author thought of them as they were writing and tossed them in as interjections
-Little exposition, other than black needle monsters and super powers
-Great imagery
— Jul 13, 2017 05:18AM
-Writing style feels too conversational; would work better spoken
-A couple puns give the impression the author thought of them as they were writing and tossed them in as interjections
-Little exposition, other than black needle monsters and super powers
-Great imagery
