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So far so good! My only complaint is all the proper nouns. I realize it's probably to make things seem important, but good lord, not everything needs to be capitalized. It gets annoying.
— Jul 16, 2017 04:26AM
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Rachel
is 41% done
Geez, Gwen, use that brain you're 'famous' for!!! Being stupid and NOT THINKING is not what I want to read about. You're in the middle of a death-match, girl, so use your freakin' skull! Seriously, too much stupid just gets really irritating, really quickly.
— Jul 17, 2017 05:38PM
Rachel
is 41% done
Self-doubt's getting a little annoying...Stop whining and be like Nike's slogan: Just do it. She's just seeming a bit OOC and it's bothering me. And yet, I'm still (mostly) enjoying it. (Sorry for all the complaints.)
— Jul 17, 2017 10:15AM
Rachel
is 32% done
Definitely enjoying it much more now that I figured out what was bugging me. I think knowing that something was bothering me was distracting because I couldn't figure out WHAT was bothering me. Anyway, liking it a lot better now!
— Jul 17, 2017 03:17AM
Rachel
is 19% done
Ah-ha! I think I finally figured out what's bothering me! I realize the series is called 'The Atlantis Grail', but this book seems to be deviating from what, to me, is the most interesting aspect and main plot: the asteroid and Earth going BOOM. It just feels like a big detour...?
— Jul 16, 2017 02:31PM
Rachel
is 2% done
Also, I don't really like her hitting him. If you love someone, you DO NOT hit them. Perhaps playfully, but not in anger. Although I totally understand why she would be upset. Even so...
— Jul 16, 2017 04:29AM
