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Geez, Gwen, use that brain you're 'famous' for!!! Being stupid and NOT THINKING is not what I want to read about. You're in the middle of a death-match, girl, so use your freakin' skull! Seriously, too much stupid just gets really irritating, really quickly.

Self-doubt's getting a little annoying...Stop whining and be like Nike's slogan: Just do it. She's just seeming a bit OOC and it's bothering me. And yet, I'm still (mostly) enjoying it. (Sorry for all the complaints.)

Definitely enjoying it much more now that I figured out what was bugging me. I think knowing that something was bothering me was distracting because I couldn't figure out WHAT was bothering me. Anyway, liking it a lot better now!

Ah-ha! I think I finally figured out what's bothering me! I realize the series is called 'The Atlantis Grail', but this book seems to be deviating from what, to me, is the most interesting aspect and main plot: the asteroid and Earth going BOOM. It just feels like a big detour...?

So far so good! My only complaint is all the proper nouns. I realize it's probably to make things seem important, but good lord, not everything needs to be capitalized. It gets annoying.