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“In my short life I’ve had everyone else telling me what they think I am instead of letting me be what I want.

Had that feeling before... many times

"I think the only way to kill Nurmedov was to take away his food. No wonder he’d survived so many adventures. The man simply ate his way through any exploit. It gave new meaning to the phrase leaving a trail of breadcrumbs."

I like Nurmedov, he makes me smile

“Never use your age as an excuse to be ignorant.” He corrected. Then he added, “I’m almost thirty and I still know next to nothing about life.”

Truth.

“I don’t trust you.”
“Did you ever?”
“Yes.” I nodded. “Yes I did.” I bit back my anger. “And you ruined that.”
“It was worth it.” He said.

Brave chap ;)

"I wanted to put a sea between me and my fifteen years of life. Between me and this city."

I'd like to know someone who hasn't thought this at least once

Nurmedov is great. I love smart-alecks :)

Ok, chapter 9 is my favorite chapter so far, but it's also the most frustrating. There is a creature named the Zerbyrs, or is it Zerbrys, or is it Zerybyrs. Stuff like that pulls me out of a otherwise wonderfully written chapter.

“Yes, the wolves.” I said. “Are you not afraid of them?” “No, little lady. They are afraid of me.”

Starting off with a mysterious BA stranger. Ok, I'm listening.