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Caleb M.
is 66% done
"I think the only way to kill Nurmedov was to take away his food. No wonder he’d survived so many adventures. The man simply ate his way through any exploit. It gave new meaning to the phrase leaving a trail of breadcrumbs."
I like Nurmedov, he makes me smile
— Aug 12, 2017 10:46PM
I like Nurmedov, he makes me smile
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Caleb M.
is 71% done
“In my short life I’ve had everyone else telling me what they think I am instead of letting me be what I want.
Had that feeling before... many times
— Aug 13, 2017 02:43PM
Had that feeling before... many times
Caleb M.
is 57% done
“Never use your age as an excuse to be ignorant.” He corrected. Then he added, “I’m almost thirty and I still know next to nothing about life.”
Truth.
— Aug 11, 2017 08:50PM
Truth.
Caleb M.
is 39% done
“I don’t trust you.”
“Did you ever?”
“Yes.” I nodded. “Yes I did.” I bit back my anger. “And you ruined that.”
“It was worth it.” He said.
Brave chap ;)
— Aug 08, 2017 09:27PM
“Did you ever?”
“Yes.” I nodded. “Yes I did.” I bit back my anger. “And you ruined that.”
“It was worth it.” He said.
Brave chap ;)
Caleb M.
is 29% done
"I wanted to put a sea between me and my fifteen years of life. Between me and this city."
I'd like to know someone who hasn't thought this at least once
— Aug 06, 2017 11:20PM
I'd like to know someone who hasn't thought this at least once
Caleb M.
is 13% done
Ok, chapter 9 is my favorite chapter so far, but it's also the most frustrating. There is a creature named the Zerbyrs, or is it Zerbrys, or is it Zerybyrs. Stuff like that pulls me out of a otherwise wonderfully written chapter.
— Aug 05, 2017 04:54PM
Caleb M.
is 13% done
“You are not, under any circumstances, to reveal your ignorance.”
“You already said that.”
“I’m saying it again.”
“So…you want me to be a mute?”
“That would please me to no end.”
got a chuckle out of this one :)
— Aug 04, 2017 08:32PM
“You already said that.”
“I’m saying it again.”
“So…you want me to be a mute?”
“That would please me to no end.”
got a chuckle out of this one :)
Caleb M.
is 7% done
“Yes, the wolves.” I said. “Are you not afraid of them?” “No, little lady. They are afraid of me.”
Starting off with a mysterious BA stranger. Ok, I'm listening.
— Aug 03, 2017 10:51PM
Starting off with a mysterious BA stranger. Ok, I'm listening.
