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On the first page of the prologue, the young Beothuk pauses to rest, letting the canoe drift with the current. The problem is he is paddling upriver from the coast, made clearly evident in the next paragraphs. Some slight stage management in the first few pages: "tore his eyes away from the flood scene." Not hopeful of the best read.
Jun 13, 2017 11:03AM
The Badger Riot


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