Susan’s Reviews > Wearing the Spider (A Suspense Novel) (Legal Thriller) > Status Update
Susan
is 85% done
This has gotten absolutely painful, with endless details that don't matter to the reader, unbelievable situations and reactions from the main characters, and a time line that is totally unrealistic.
— Jul 05, 2012 12:04AM
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Susan
is 52% done
This is really bad. I would love to know what happens in the end but in the meantime the writing is taking on all the groan-worthy characteristics of a pulp fiction romance novel.
— Jul 04, 2012 07:18PM
Susan
is 15% done
Aha! Now that I see a trap being set for the young female attorney, the Nana in me is silently yelling "watch out!" This may turn out to be a formulaic semi-thriller, but I've got my eye on the bad guy from the get-go. At least I think I do!
— Jul 04, 2012 02:22PM
Susan
is 4% done
The first few pages were tempting; but now I'm faced with the confusing chitchat of multiple phone calls, long before the characters have really established themselves in the readers' mind. Looks like I'll wind up rereading this part after the author has introduced me to who's who so I can figure out what it all means.
— Jul 04, 2012 01:32PM
