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Kat (Lost in Neverland) is on page 76 of 241
This book seems to have a surprising lack of commas where they're really needed. I've resorted to having a pencil with me while I read to correct anything.
Jul 12, 2012 08:24AM
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Kat (Lost in Neverland) is on page 169 of 241
Two things:
1.6th graders are 11 years old, not 13. Sometimes 12 depending on their birthday.
2. This '13 year old' acts like she's 8 years old. And they're treating her like it.
The office secretaries did what they could for Susan, telling her stories and giving her small bits of candy. And whenever the little girl began feeling down, Jaime reminded her about the good things in life.
Jul 12, 2012 05:12PM
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Kat (Lost in Neverland)
Kat (Lost in Neverland) is on page 92 of 241
Wyatt grinned half timidly and half excitedly.
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*tries to grin 'half timidly and half excitedly'* ....Nope, doesn't work.
Jul 12, 2012 10:31AM
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Kat (Lost in Neverland)
Kat (Lost in Neverland) is on page 14 of 241
Okay, who doesn't know what gazelles are? Jaime apparently thinks they are "Those awkward bird things."
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Jul 11, 2012 10:05AM
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Kat (Lost in Neverland)
Kat (Lost in Neverland) is on page 9 of 241
Haha, aw, this is already really funny.
Jul 11, 2012 09:42AM
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