Catherine’s Reviews > A Package Deal > Status Update

Okay, the use of the words "privates" instead of cock or penis or, hell, even "length" is weirdly juvenile for this moment. Then again, the character whose POV it is at the moment did have has sexuality stunted at an early age, so it makes sense. It's still a little weird to read, though.

This "homeless experiment" is a friggin' bizarro pot twist.

I've been enjoying this book with its emotionally scarred characters and its complicated relationships but I keep thinking, "Now is when Robby will stand up for himself & Tristan. Now is when he'll grow a pair." But every time, he lets vile people say vile things about the person he loves and the person he is. This may have been one time too many b/c this time, he was an active participant. I'm sick.

Hmmm... I read a few reviews where people were upset or chose not to read the book because the sex scenes were so PG as to be practically fade to black. Now, I'm red blooded woman that likes my characters to bang like bunnies just as much as the next gal, but I dunno... Given who these characters are and what their background is, the more soft-focused love scene made sense to me.

Mikey is the most vile human being I have ever read about.

*screaming at her kindle*

OH MY FUCKING GOD! GO TO THE HOSPITAL AND THEN GO TO THE FUCKING POLICE!!!

Tristan keeps on delivering the tiny heart stabbies.

God, Robby is so fucking spineless. Tristan and Savannah deserve better.

I like that we, as readers, don't get much more information or insight into this potential relationship than Robby doe;l it keeps me stumbling through the story wondering what the fuck?! What IS this relationship? How will it work?!

Oh, this Mikey character has GOT to go. The guy's a d-bag and I find it hard to believe that this MC that we're supposed to like would be friends with him.