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M60601
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WHY DID RONAN KISS TEN? WHY IS THIS HAPPENING? WHY IS THIS SO POORLY WRITTEN? The sexual tension is actual garbage. This story is officially garbage.
— Mar 16, 2018 11:07PM
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M60601
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This is like the 4th or 5th time Law and Order has been mentioned. And how are there no fucking cameras in this police station??????
— Mar 17, 2018 01:07AM
M60601
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Skimming through this drivel and rolling my eyes at any future mentionings of Christianity in the context of psychics.
Also, this is a fucking PR nightmare that no reality TV show can fix.
And I'm sure this happens, but it is such a severe thing to write about. A cop raping a 5 year old boy.
— Mar 17, 2018 12:59AM
Also, this is a fucking PR nightmare that no reality TV show can fix.
And I'm sure this happens, but it is such a severe thing to write about. A cop raping a 5 year old boy.
M60601
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Pretty much all the drama that happened in the last ten pages has utterly crushed my will to continue this. He was arrested but he is out of jail? Did he post bond? Was he never in jail. What is happening. I just want to skip to them arresting the only obvious person to the readers.
— Mar 17, 2018 12:53AM
M60601
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There is literally only 1 person in this story described negatively, and he is starting to fit the profile of the suspect...
But fuck, Ronan cannot keep his fucking mouth shut. He just shouts and "bellows" without any consideration of where he is and who is with him. These type of people disgust me.
— Mar 17, 2018 12:45AM
But fuck, Ronan cannot keep his fucking mouth shut. He just shouts and "bellows" without any consideration of where he is and who is with him. These type of people disgust me.
M60601
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Ugh, a fucking performance. None of this is ethical... none of this makes sense.
— Mar 17, 2018 12:43AM
M60601
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"DNA doesn't lie." It does, all the fucking time. You'd think as a cop Ronan would know that. That even if the DNA was a 99.99% match, which isn't likely from 7 year old DNA that was definitely not preserved properly, concrete aside, it doesn't mean the results are absolute. Given the fact that no DNA % was given, I can't even say 99.99%. Ronan is so frustrating.
— Mar 17, 2018 12:41AM
M60601
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Oh my! They finally mentioned that nothing Tennyson contributes is legally helpful. Nothing he says should be able to get a warrant, let alone be admissible in court. A good DA would tear it apart easily.
— Mar 17, 2018 12:36AM
M60601
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How many people have actually made or eaten a tuna casserole? What Jackie says is the realistic thing so far, and it is also the most cliched.
— Mar 17, 2018 12:32AM
M60601
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Ronan isn't likable, Tennyson isn't likable. How can I be expected to care?
— Mar 17, 2018 12:25AM
M60601
is 51% done
Skipped all the sex because I don't see them as a couple...
Trying to explain Ten's history with religion, I THOUGHT HE WAS FROM LOUISIANA, NOT KANSAS.
— Mar 17, 2018 12:20AM
Trying to explain Ten's history with religion, I THOUGHT HE WAS FROM LOUISIANA, NOT KANSAS.

