Pj’s Reviews > Legacy of the Fallen > Status Update
Pj
is 33% done
So many run on sentences. The poor audible narrator sounds like he's running out of breath. I think this needed a bit more editing. Also... Is it me or have some of the protagonists' personalities changed since the first book?
— Apr 27, 2018 10:05AM
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Pj
is 45% done
Why is everything described as "savage?" People, animals, blows... always savage... Need to work on these echoes.
— Apr 27, 2018 01:54PM
