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Pj
is 11% done
These books often read like the author had read nothing but Russian translated LitRPGs before trying his hand at writing. So many of the awkward translations from Russian have been carried over into the author's style.
— May 05, 2018 02:15AM
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Pj
is 50% done
This guy either hates pronouns, or is the victim of a prank where someone did a find and replace of the word "she" for "the beautiful woman."
— May 06, 2018 11:12AM
Pj
is 30% done
Every time a woman enter's the story: defined as pretty or beautiful, contemplation of whether she's interested in the protagonist or not, and if the protagonist wants a thing with her. Thereafter they are known as "the beautiful/pretty girl" or "The beauty." It's getting old.
— May 06, 2018 06:55AM
Pj
is 10% done
These books need tags before each section that indicate whether or not they can be skipped. The adventure parts are okay, but all the awkward flirting and objectifying descriptions leave me continually rolling my eyes. After the first two books I knew what I was getting into, but I just can't get over how bad at least 1/3 of these books are.
— May 05, 2018 02:12AM
