Ravencrantz’s Reviews > Division: A Collection of Science Fiction Fairytales > Status Update
Ravencrantz
is finished
#7 better? two women who have a daughter are the main focus so thats gr8 but thats also it. it deals with grief and moving on from loss i can see the importance of it and what it was trying to do but with the rest of the book it was underwhelming
— Jun 04, 2018 09:18PM
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Ravencrantz
is 79% done
#6 finally one i liked! creepy and managed to have an actual ending that didnt leave me wanting so much more. do i have questions? sure but theyre normal "end of story " questions and not "this is unfinished " questions
— Jun 04, 2018 08:59PM
Ravencrantz
is 69% done
#5 while i like the idea of easily being able to change your appeared gender (provided you have the money maybe? unclear) the second i got interested this story was over and it was the shortest one yet so i was actually hoping it had something of a plot....
— Jun 04, 2018 08:47PM
Ravencrantz
is 63% done
the title is misleading these aren't fairy tales at all story 4 is weird and not in a good way im not liking this collection
— Jun 04, 2018 07:27AM
Ravencrantz
is 31% done
story 2: again no real conclusion and im left unsatisfied. short stories still need a climax and conclusion otherwise theyre just unsatisfying snippets. i also dont see how these are fairytales??
— Jun 03, 2018 06:08AM
Ravencrantz
is 24% done
i forgot why i never read short stories as soon as i get invested in and figure out whats happening with the plot, its over and im left thinking "what thats it?" we'll see what else this collection has to offer so far story 1 is 👎
— Jun 02, 2018 09:08PM
