Debra Johnson’s Reviews > Zaruv > Status Update

I’d never felt like this about a woman before. I’d had my dalliances and my political relationships,
Now we can add repetitive. And... I am starting to get really bored with this book.
Book Club. Zaruv (Kindle Locations 674-675). Kindle Edition.

Tell me, are you really willing to risk her life so that she only has once prince to choose from?”
Error. This sentence doesn't make sense on many levels.
Book Club. Zaruv (Kindle Locations 579-580). Kindle Edition.

He shook his brother gently as I stood watched a few feet away.
Editing error.
Book Club. Zaruv (Kindle Location 538). Kindle Edition.

The dialog is often stilted and sometimes hard to know who is speaking due to punctuation problems.

Leaving the clinic would be a challenge, it was spending, even more, time alone with the alien that scared me senseless.
Editing error. Too many commas.
Book Club. Zaruv (Kindle Location 322). Kindle Edition.