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Debra Johnson
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Tell me, are you really willing to risk her life so that she only has once prince to choose from?”
Error. This sentence doesn't make sense on many levels.
Book Club. Zaruv (Kindle Locations 579-580). Kindle Edition.
— Jun 05, 2018 11:03AM
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Book Club. Zaruv (Kindle Locations 579-580). Kindle Edition.
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Debra Johnson
is 29% done
I’d never felt like this about a woman before. I’d had my dalliances and my political relationships,
Now we can add repetitive. And... I am starting to get really bored with this book.
Book Club. Zaruv (Kindle Locations 674-675). Kindle Edition.
— Jun 05, 2018 11:43AM
Now we can add repetitive. And... I am starting to get really bored with this book.
Book Club. Zaruv (Kindle Locations 674-675). Kindle Edition.
Debra Johnson
is 23% done
He shook his brother gently as I stood watched a few feet away.
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Book Club. Zaruv (Kindle Location 538). Kindle Edition.
— Jun 05, 2018 08:42AM
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Book Club. Zaruv (Kindle Location 538). Kindle Edition.
Debra Johnson
is 20% done
The dialog is often stilted and sometimes hard to know who is speaking due to punctuation problems.
— Jun 05, 2018 08:39AM
Debra Johnson
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Leaving the clinic would be a challenge, it was spending, even more, time alone with the alien that scared me senseless.
Editing error. Too many commas.
Book Club. Zaruv (Kindle Location 322). Kindle Edition.
— Jun 05, 2018 08:36AM
Editing error. Too many commas.
Book Club. Zaruv (Kindle Location 322). Kindle Edition.
Debra Johnson
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“Shall I share make your royal presences known?”
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Book Club. Zaruv (Kindle Location 106). Kindle Edition.
— Jun 05, 2018 08:34AM
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Book Club. Zaruv (Kindle Location 106). Kindle Edition.
