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Pati
is 2% done
Definitely odd... chapter beginning..."about Jack Eby:"..... "about Ben Blair:".... very odd.
— Jun 10, 2018 04:42PM
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Pati
is 7% done
Damn... this is almost all telling with many POVs.... *sigh* I don't know why it has so many 5 star ratings. I'm bored and sadly just not interested at all. Life's too short.... DNF
— Jun 10, 2018 05:47PM
Pati
is 4% done
This is starting out oddly.... I hope that the story isn't told like this prologue. This is like reading a history documentary.
— Jun 10, 2018 02:55PM
