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Becca is on page 199 of 304
I want to give up on this. The author's holding off details for too freaking long. There's a very careful balance in that, telling just enough to keep a reader interested and waiting too long so that when the reveal finally comes its a letdown because nothing is worth waiting that long for. There's also some poor characterization of the women in this. And the MC is strange. But I've gotten too far into it.
Aug 04, 2018 04:24PM
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Becca is on page 80 of 304
Not sure how I feel about this one. Monetizing, commodifying, something sacred feels sacriligious but I'm a bit interested to see where this goes.
Jul 25, 2018 08:27PM
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