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Learnt a bit about Machiavelli and encountered the St Kilda isles for the second time this year (first in the context of xkcd-Geohashing).

Oh my. I could have done with less detail, but… sure.

The political scene is quite AU here but workable; this seems pretty well thought-out, if written with weak orthography etc.

Author needs a spellchecker and some more research. But a few of their more recent stories are well-researched, so I guess it’s going to get better as this story progresses, too.