Dustin’s Reviews > Philanthropic Ways > Status Update

Redemption and genuine forgiveness are great-even admirable-- themes, but in that last scene (Chapter One of Ten,) the ages-old adage rings true: "Show, don't tell." It would have been a lot more powerful and moving if the reader saw her dream, in vivid detail, and also showing her conflicting emotions in real-time. ☺

Part VII--The Homecoming

So many different emotions, such depth to these characters...😊

Part V-- Benefactor's Way

Things are coming full circle now, and I'm excited than ever.☺

Amelia’s probably my favorite character so far. I have a deep admiration for her inner strength, which includes but isn't limited to her faith in God, and self-respect and dignity.

However, her story isn't nearly as eventful as Averel's or Carly’s. Not a criticism, merely observation.

I am anxious to see where this is going.☺

Part IV-Amelia Lanson's Life Path-- her choice

It's been a week already, and I'm looking forward to seeing how the next section plays out. Also, in the group, we've had some good discussions. Check it out if you're interested in UPLIFTING, life-affirming books.

Part III- Carly Collinge's Life Path--Her Choice

The group read began yesterday. It runs all month. All are welcome to join!😊

https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/...

I'm anxious to dive in, and get some discussions going. I hope to see some of you there!☺