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Redemption and genuine forgiveness are great-even admirable-- themes, but in that last scene (Chapter One of Ten,) the ages-old adage rings true: "Show, don't tell." It would have been a lot more powerful and moving if the reader saw her dream, in vivid detail, and also showing her conflicting emotions in real-time. ☺
Apr 16, 2019 05:39PM
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Part VII--The Homecoming

So many different emotions, such depth to these characters...😊
Apr 14, 2019 02:12PM
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Part V-- Benefactor's Way

Things are coming full circle now, and I'm excited than ever.☺
Mar 22, 2019 02:40PM
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Amelia’s probably my favorite character so far. I have a deep admiration for her inner strength, which includes but isn't limited to her faith in God, and self-respect and dignity.

However, her story isn't nearly as eventful as Averel's or Carly’s. Not a criticism, merely observation.

I am anxious to see where this is going.☺
Mar 21, 2019 05:41PM
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Part IV-Amelia Lanson's Life Path-- her choice
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It's been a week already, and I'm looking forward to seeing how the next section plays out. Also, in the group, we've had some good discussions. Check it out if you're interested in UPLIFTING, life-affirming books.
Mar 08, 2019 07:37AM
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Part III- Carly Collinge's Life Path--Her Choice
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Part II-Avarel Andersen’s Life Path--Her Choice
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The group read began yesterday. It runs all month. All are welcome to join!😊

https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/...

I'm anxious to dive in, and get some discussions going. I hope to see some of you there!☺
Mar 02, 2019 12:18PM
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