Benoit Lelièvre’s Reviews > Stagger Bay > Status Update
Benoit Lelièvre
is 40% done
Not sure where this is going anymore. Markus first gets terribly wronged, then does something awesome to make things right. Now he's hanging out with street gangs? Whaaat?
— Jan 15, 2013 04:30AM
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Benoit Lelièvre
is 72% done
I'm starting to find this fascinating, as there is an illusion of moral ambiguity. It's structured to be ambiguous, but it's not. As much as I disagree with some stuff, my real problems with Stagger Bay are few and I find it rather challenging.
— Jan 16, 2013 04:01AM
Benoit Lelièvre
is 26% done
Well, this is going in all sorts of unexpected directions. Fresh and surprising, but I just don't feel it has really kicked off yet.
— Jan 14, 2013 04:04AM
Benoit Lelièvre
is 8% done
Well, sctratch that. There are still unnecessary curves in the narrative and self-involved passages, BUT it's still a dramatic improvement. There is a sense of flow to Stagger Bay and it's tighter than what Hansen has gotten me used to.
— Jan 11, 2013 08:45PM
Benoit Lelièvre
is 3% done
I'm not far yet, but what I've read is already a dramatic improvement over Street Raised
— Jan 11, 2013 06:16AM
