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Erik Orrantia
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A couple of very contrived coming out scenes plus poor editing. It's not getting much better. The writing can sometimes be an exemplar of telling, not showing.
— Jan 19, 2013 10:29AM
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Erik Orrantia
is on page 130 of 239
Still a bit hard to swallow. I'm surprised by the number of grammatical errors.
— Jan 20, 2013 12:48PM
Erik Orrantia
is on page 30 of 239
I like the writing, but I'm not terribly convinced by the dialogue or the premise so far.
— Jan 17, 2013 05:50PM
