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C5...in Chapter 4 > “Dad” n “dad” choose one…page 75 “door led NO COMMA me…" "hanging THEM from the chain NO COMMA as I…” P 80 “freezer, in which, he” reads odd… “toast and jam to eat WITH tea.”… “perched as I was high on the sink” reads odd… p 81… “death came back to me” italicize the full sentence NO COMMA… “realizing as I did it had been unlocked” reads odd and the italics is unnecessary…p 82 “had have” reads odd…
— May 30, 2019 01:17PM
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Chapter 4...In Chapter 3 > Page 58 “incredulously PERIOD”…Page 59 to 61 beginning quotations back to back “She appeared….”We found…”We don’t…Page 66 “…is endless PERIOD
— May 29, 2019 03:08PM
