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Silas' bratty attitude is getting tiresome. His refusal to learn about being a Methuselah (😒) makes his worry for Remy seem disingenuous, since that's what is keeping him (as far as I know at this point) from actually seeing his friend.
— Jul 15, 2019 07:34PM
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It's kind of odd that Silas uses the word pretentious in his thoughts yet he can't pronounce metaphor correctly. Or that he doesn't know what a prerequisite is. Also I'm not sure what I think of the words Methuselah and Mana as they are used here, maybe if the story ends up with some kind of biblical backstory that will make more sense.
— Jul 15, 2019 04:52PM