Tammy’s Reviews > The Beyond > Status Update

Example: battle scene that’s 2-3 pages long of descriptors. Then... “we were scared”. Never once did the writing convey scared. We’re just told it in the end. So much is wrong it’s taking away from the story. Very disappointed this far. I hope it gets better.

So, I’m not sure what’s new or what’s going on here but the writing in this book is just crap so far. New editor? New ghostwriter? I’m not sure but the complex sentencing that doesn’t flow the tell tell tell rather than show is all just killing it for me. When I have to read a sentence two, three times to figure out what the heck she’s trying to convey I’m just not thrilled.