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Sam Schooler
Sam Schooler is 15% done
"I'm having a hard time getting into this one. The MC is juvenile, & not in an endearing way. The other MC spends a good chunk of pages being referred to as "Hunk Guy," even after significant interaction between the two. I have a hard time believing that you wouldn't offer someone your name if you're driving them to their hotel. The section with MC 2's mother was funny, but it felt like she was there for exposition.
Feb 21, 2013 01:03PM
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