Kathy’s Reviews > Shield of Fire > Status Update

This read started out great, drew me right in, then it coughed, sputtered, and fell on the floor in a huff. I think the author got lost in the characters. Let me expand... heroine took a step, handsome rescuer slide his hand through his hair, heroine signed, handsome breathed.....Pleeeease, I don't want to know every moment, every thought. It should not take pages to cover only a couple mundane hours. Step it up!