Debra Johnson’s Reviews > Wild Temptation > Status Update
Debra Johnson
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I've made it to chapter 11 and I have a few problems with this.
There are complete sentences that are literally duplicated one after the other. Odd that an editor or beta reader didn't catch this. It happens numerous times.
The other problem I have is it is slow moving due to being too wordy.
The steamy scenes are steamy, but they have problems too.
Really needs a good editor.
— Feb 29, 2020 03:38PM
There are complete sentences that are literally duplicated one after the other. Odd that an editor or beta reader didn't catch this. It happens numerous times.
The other problem I have is it is slow moving due to being too wordy.
The steamy scenes are steamy, but they have problems too.
Really needs a good editor.
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Debra Johnson
is on page 54 of 233
While I am enjoying this one, it just isn't moving fast enough for my mood to keep me interested.
So once again I'm putting another book on the back burner. I will get back to it soon.
— Feb 23, 2020 05:44PM
So once again I'm putting another book on the back burner. I will get back to it soon.
