Janet Ruyle’s Reviews > Hale Maree > Status Update
Janet Ruyle
is 26% done
WHAT?!? Oscar's 'alibi' explanation (smh)... afraid this must be relegated to the dnf shelf.
— May 14, 2013 07:40AM
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Janet Ruyle
is 23% done
Why are the girls in these stories always tingling? I've been attracted to plenty of guys but not sure I've ever tingled because of it. A foot that's fallen asleep, yeah. An infatuation, not so much.
— May 14, 2013 07:11AM
Janet Ruyle
is 18% done
Ugh... so far this is a hot mess. Timeline, detail and logic issues abound. I see the potential here, but this is in serious need of an editor.
— May 14, 2013 06:40AM