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Awkward purple prose and a host of issues, some general, most my own made this a nope for me.
*1.5 Stars* rounded up (because I finished it)
— Apr 26, 2020 08:41PM
*1.5 Stars* rounded up (because I finished it)
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Claire B **paused for now**
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What? This is making no sense... Words and actions are diametrically opposed.
— Apr 26, 2020 08:08PM
Claire B **paused for now**
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That is some very dodgy reasoning and an unkind way to behave too. It’s a contrived, clumsy plot device that doesn’t make sense in relation to Issac’s character so far. Beware the drama llama.
— Apr 26, 2020 07:38PM
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Wait a damn minute, Iz! You haven’t seen him in over a year and the last time you did he hurled homophobic abuse at you and fucked with your head. Now you’re inviting him for coffee? Punch him in the nads. I won’t mind.
— Apr 26, 2020 03:47PM
Claire B **paused for now**
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Dressers are for China and belong in kitchens or dining rooms. Nightstands are bedside tables and pants are worn under your trousers. Am I being picky? Oh yes. The author is a Brit and lives in Wales so why is she writing American English? That felt good... I haven’t had a bloody good moan for ages.
— Apr 26, 2020 06:19AM
