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"-Ellery Sharpe, the owner of the legs—"

Writing lesson number one: Always introduce your heroine by objectifying her and making her the total sum of her best asset as viewed by the hero.
Jul 09, 2013 02:17PM
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Just when I think that maybe... "He was pummeling her womb--" ...And no. Just no.
Jul 12, 2013 03:49AM
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That's one borrowed thing too many.
Jul 11, 2013 06:36AM
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A German would call it football, not soccer. She'd probably give a German player's name as an example too, and only elaborate with Beckham after the American appeared confused.
Jul 11, 2013 05:28AM
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Good for him.
Jul 11, 2013 04:46AM
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So this is where the author stops pretending to be subtle and introduces a hammer. Not that there ever was any doubt which book she was talking about. What happened? Gabaldon didn't okay the tribute? I am shocked.
Jul 11, 2013 03:47AM
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And that makes it okay? Congratulations, they're both wrong and I don't think these two deserve a HEA with each other.
Jul 11, 2013 02:08AM
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Her choice, dammit, it was her choice. They asked and she chose. He's not a mind reader.
Jul 11, 2013 12:46AM
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Of course she didn't tell him. The right thing is too hard to do.
Jul 11, 2013 12:40AM
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He wanted to plough her thighs? Well, plow, since this is in American English, but I'm not sure even that makes it anatomically possible.
Jul 10, 2013 10:37PM
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He's not actively trying to coax her into bed with him, so that's good. But he is aware she's intoxicated and he IS trying to manipulate her into writing the article in a way that's most lucrative to him. Taking advantage of her drunkenness economically is still taking advantage of her.
Jul 10, 2013 08:54AM
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