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Tarl
is 23% done
The first novella in this anthology was a hard one to slug through. POV switches, flashbacks, far too much detail and description...it all made for a very confusing and hard to read story. I found myself forcing myself to read until the end and didn't care at all about the characters. They were completely unsympathetic and unrelatable.
— Jul 17, 2013 07:43AM
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Tarl
is 65% done
Tim Curran's story started out with huge possibilities, however, the ending was just a giant cluster f*ck of random mythos things thrown into a giant pot with little to no care. The second of his stories to feature a prison, I would highly recommend you seek out his other story where he truly shines and leave this one alone. So much potential wasted on such a terrible ending.
— Jul 21, 2013 05:23PM
Tarl
is 46% done
Formatting issues with the pictures meant that I missed the first page of the second and third chapters of this piece. Felt like the last two parts of it were tacked on and it could have easily ended in the elevator and would have been just as good. Still, the story was well done and highly enjoyable.
— Jul 18, 2013 06:25AM
