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I’m curious if this author is British. Story is set in America, but the laws would never be like what is being described and some terminology is clearly British. If a story is set in America, use American terms.
— Sep 29, 2020 12:26PM
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Bronwyn
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Hoo boy! 18 pages in and every time one character asks about a family member the answer is that they’re dead. Then one MC asks the other MC how he’s doing and he says he’s dying. Enough with the dead already! It’s only the first chapter! Plus, it could be stated a little more tactfully. “He/she passed away” is a less brutal answer.
— Sep 29, 2020 10:40AM
